Writing Progress Update #22

by Scott Marlowe (@scottmarlowe) 12/29/2008 9:38:31 PM

A weekly progress report as I work through the (second pass) editing of my current fantasy novel.

Another good week. Before I jump into the numbers, some reflection: I find myself cutting a lot of "junk". By that I mean passages that are nothing more than info dumps or scenes where a character is thinking, introspectively, mayhap trying to rationalize something out, but I'm finding those paragraphs kind of tedious to read. I can only assume if I find them so, how's a reader going to feel? That's an excellent warning sign of something that probably needs to go. In fact, if you take nothing else from this post, take that. If you find yourself losing interest while reading your own writing, chances are your readers are going to feel the same way. No point in keeping such baggage around.

Now, on to the progress…

Like I started to say: it was a good week, especially considering half of it was spent at various xmas functions. Overall, I advanced my current page editing to 140, up from last week's 125. Total pages dropped (again) from 361 to 354. That gave me 22 pages for the week.

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Percent complete jumped to 39.5% from last week's 34.6%:

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Total word count proved interesting once more, decreasing by 1,864 to a total of 104,006. It's amazing how much that keeps going down as I cut and slash and tighten my prose. It will be interesting indeed to see where it lands when all is said and done.

That's it for now. Back to writing for me.

Weekend Links 12/27/08

by Scott Marlowe (@scottmarlowe) 12/27/2008 10:15:00 AM

Durango, CO Another round of interesting things I came across, out a day late because yesterday was post-xmas shopping day and, more importantly, a day after xmas bike ride to burn off some of those xmas day calories.

Here they are.

Do Science Fiction Fans Hate Libraries?

My friend Megan is a librarian at a major metropolitan library. She recently asked me "why don't sci-fi and fantasy readers use libraries?" I was taken aback - I figured that genre fans everywhere used libraries and that would include readers of science fiction. But no, apparently they don't.

Discipline

If you're a writer, there are many hurdles to overcome.

Was Early Earth a Fiery Hell or Packed with Life?

Conventional wisdom among geologists has always been that the first several million years in Earth's 4.5 billion-year history were an age of lava and fire. Nothing could possibly live in on the burning planet until at least 3.2 billion years ago - or so scientists thought.

This Writing Life: Jason Sanford "To dump, or not to dump"

Ah, the information dump. That wordy bit of fictional exposition, during which all the background information the reader needs to enjoy a story is expressed in one great big pile of, well, dump.

Advertising, The Science Fiction Version

Two California companies have invented technologies that quite literally create ads customized to the moments in which they're being viewed. This is a really cool and scary idea.

How to Write a Novel (Part II)

You’re writing a novel and you’re curious to see just how many words you’ve written. 10,000. Good. Keep going.

Writing Progress Update #21

by Scott Marlowe (@scottmarlowe) 12/22/2008 9:58:53 PM

A weekly progress report as I work through the (second pass) editing of my current fantasy novel.

This was a good week. Much better than last, anyway. I managed to edit through 28 pages total, only 2 of which came from page reduction. That puts me at a current page of 125, up from last week's 99, out of 361 pages total, down from last week's 363.

Here's the first graph:

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Percentage complete, now at 34.63% (I'm 1/3rd of the way there!):

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Last, total word count, which now stands at 105,870 compared to last week's 106,591:

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So, I dropped about 700 words, which more or less continues my downward trend as shown directly above. Still, I only reduced the total page count by 2 this time; most of the progress came from pushing forward.

I've been shooting for roughly 20 pages/week. From a full-time writer's perspective that probably isn't very good, but I don't think that's a fair outlook on things. You have to look at it from the perspective of someone who does this in his spare time after going to work every day. Anyway, the moral of this story is to write, however and whenever you can.

Hope to have some good progress to report next week as well. I've got one more day at work, then I'm off the remainder of the year, so I sure hope I'm able to make good use of the time.

Weekend Links 12/19/08

by Scott Marlowe (@scottmarlowe) 12/19/2008 2:12:00 PM

Tulum Mayan RuinsHere's this weekend's cool and interesting links for your viewing pleasure.

The Great American Query Letter

Recently, funny things have been happening in my slush pile. I find myself receiving well-written, correctly formatted, professional-looking query letters from bad writers.

Saturn's Atmosphere Is A Modern Art Sensation

This isn't a newly-discovered Rothko painting or some kind of abstract masterpiece — it's the atmosphere of Saturn, photographed four different times on the same day.

Who are the Most Memorable Characters in Science Fiction, Fantasy and Horror?

Who are the most memorable characters in science fiction, fantasy and horror? What makes them so memorable?

The Emerald-Skinned Women Who Make the Universe a Greener Place

The most recent Star Trek trailer briefly featured a particular species of green-skinned female known for their seductive powers. Green women are a force to be reckoned with in science fiction, and they range from pint-sized invaders to powerful warriors and cunning schemers. We list the green-skinned ladies who make the universe a more colorful place.

The 10 Best Apocalypse Novels of Pre-Golden Age SF (1904-33)

With Wall-E director Andrew Stanton working on a film based on Edgar Rice Burroughs's 1917 novel A Princess of Mars, you need a crash course in books from this seminal era in science fiction.

Do Science Fiction Fans Hate Libraries?

My friend Megan is a librarian at a major metropolitan library. She recently asked me "why don't sci-fi and fantasy readers use libraries?" I was taken aback - I figured that genre fans everywhere used libraries and that would include readers of science fiction. But no, apparently they don't.

Jane Lindskold on Book Covers

by Scott Marlowe (@scottmarlowe) 12/19/2008 8:59:00 AM

Information about Jane Lindskold is becoming a regular fixture around here. Over on Tor.com, Lindskold has been writing a series of articles on book covers—how they're chosen, who does the deciding, etc. I found the articles interesting reads, so thought I'd share.

There's three four articles so far in all. Here they are:

  1. Look at What They’ve Wrapped Around My Baby!
  2. When Right is Completely Wrong
  3. Series Doesn’t Equal Set
  4. Second Look: Good Idea?

Tor Free E-book: The Buried Pyramid by Jane Lindskold

by Scott Marlowe (@scottmarlowe) 12/17/2008 7:03:00 PM

n79453Tor has another free giveaway out there: Jane Lindskold's The Buried Pyramid. This is the second book Tor is giving away by Lindskold. The first was Through Wolf's Eyes. My post about that one remains the most visited post on this site.

So what's The Buried Pyramid about? Check this out from Tor's posting:

Set in the Victorian age, The Buried Pyramid is, at the start, an archaeological suspense novel. Jenny Benet, a recently orphaned American who was raised in the Wild West before being “finished” in Boston, goes to Egypt with her uncle, Neville Hawthorne, a prominent British archaeologist. They’re searching for the legendary Buried Pyramid, the tomb of the pharaoh Neferankhotep—who may also have been Moses the Lawgiver.

Discovering the tomb is not the end of their journey but only the beginning. In The Buried Pyramid, Jane Lindskold sends us on a marvelous ride through Ancient Egyptian myth, legend, and religion and leaves us enlightened and amazed.

Sounds like an excellent adventure ride through history. Exactly my kind of book.

I'm posting this a little late, and since the free stuff is only free for so long, better go get it now if you haven't already.

Book Review: Passage by Lois McMaster Bujold

by Scott Marlowe (@scottmarlowe) 12/17/2008 12:55:00 PM

The Sharing Knife PassageLast month, I received all four of Bujold's Sharing Knife books from EOS. Their original call for advanced readers was for book four in the series, Horizon, due out January 27, 2009. But they sweetened the offer by throwing in books one through three. I jumped on it, promising to review not just Horizon, but all four books. As promised, here is the third of those reviews.

Passage is the third book in Bujold's Sharing Knife series. It is a continuation of the story begun in Beguilement and Legacy. In Legacy, Dag and Fawn come face-to-face with the bigotry of Dag's Lakewalker clan. Near driven out, Dag chooses to leave instead. But he does so with a mission in mind: to heal the rift between Lakewalker and farmer.

On one level this mission of Dag's is a personal one: acceptance of each of the peoples amongst the other would grant his marriage a greater acceptance. On another level it is a matter of long term survival for all. Because there is little communication between Lakewalker and farmer, the scourge of their land, called malices, could potentially run rampant someday because farmers remain ignorant of the early warning signs. It is with the intention of educating farmers of the malice danger that Dag sets out from his home with his wife, Fawn.

They hire themselves out to a flatboat boss, Berry, and Dag begins his journey of farmer healing and enlightenment. They are joined by two other Lakewalkers and a motley lot of farmers/riverboat-types who are drawn to Dag and Fawn's mission in their own individual ways. Much of the story focuses on this personal quest of Dag's and how, in the process, he also develops his 'ground' (magic) to a level not hereto seen in the world.

That bears some explanation: in Lakewalker society an individual is chosen early on for a specific vocation based upon the promise of their ground. Such vocations include patroller, medicine-maker, ground-setter. The principal responsibility of the Lakewalkers is patrolling the lands in search of malice; most Lakewalkers are selected as patrollers. But some others who demonstrate a greater degree of 'groundsense' may become medicine-makers or, even further, ground-setters, able to manipulate almost any material. Dag has already spent most of his life as a patroller by the time we meet him in Beguilement. In Passage, he begins to experiment with his groundsense and, aided by Fawn's knack for seeing things from her own unique perspective, finds that he has the ability to bridge the gap between patroller, medicine-maker, and ground-setter.

Passage is a good book. It's well-written, flows evenly, and possesses a myriad of interesting yet believable characters. But it also stumbles a bit in its singular purpose. Dag's quest is fun to follow, but it becomes too much of the story or, really, the entire story. Not until the end, when Dag must face a renegade Lakewalker and the mayhem he's caused, does the storyline break away into new territory. In short, I felt Passage would have benefited from a bit more going on. There is some mystery in the form of Boatboss Berry, whose family has disappeared somewhere downriver, but it's not enough.

In summary, once again Bujold doesn't disappoint in delivering a folksy tale with plenty of interesting and intriguing characters and magic, though, in the end, this one could have used an injection of something more. Regardless, I'm looking forward to the conclusion of Dag and Fawn's journey in book four, Horizon.